I never liked the ending of this story. The loan shark dying because of the mosquito just seemed pretty stupid to me. After telling the story to some other people, I have received the same response. So it wasnt just me...
I've always been a bit reluctant to talk to Lauren about how I didnt like the whole story, as I was afraid things might get weird if she gets upset. She wrote this story herself a few years ago and she also has a temper and is quite stubborn sometimes. This makes it a bit hard for me to convince her that she's going in the wrong direction or is being too ambitious sometimes, while trying to keep everything cool between us so we can work as a team.
I've tried talking to her about the ending recently...I was really nervous during the whole conversation, trying to rehearse everything i'd say a few seconds before i do it. She seemed pretty bummed out that other people thought the story was a bit silly and was very reluctant when it came to doing something about it. After a while, I managed to get her to "think" about it...
To be continued :)
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